Sunday, April 26, 2009

A Winnar Is Me!

Script Frenzy is a challenge to write a 100 page script in a month. AND I DID! I thought script writing would be way harder than NaNo but it was ridiculously easy. I only had writer's block like three times. I didn't even have to figure out the format because Celtx does it all for me. It was really fun and way less frustrating than NaNoWriMo was. So anyway, I will write more hopefully tomorrow, but here are a list of my Scriptisms (fun typos):

KATE
Do you want some mints? I have some in my person.
Or, you know, in her purse.

In the forest, a big square of ground is surrounded by crime scene tape. Police and forensic people mill around, doing forensic stuff.
I don’t really know what I’m talking about.

He roughly turns Kate around and coughs her.
This is how cops apprehend suspects: They cough on them! Or they could cuff them. Either one.

KATE
The blast is just going to riddle him with little hills…
I would like to see that. It’s actually going to riddle him with little holes.

He gives her a card. Kate winches.
I was deciding between using “flinches” or “winces”. I guess my mind split the difference.

KATE
I’m going to talk to Ivanov first and figure out what’s going why.
And then she’s going to figure out when’s going where!

She takes out her phone and starts to text Alex.
Dear God, who is Alex? WHO IS HE? This random Alex just showed up and took Asher’s place!

They exist
Ha ha, this made my script all of a sudden sound like some existential philosophical teleplay. It’s supposed to say “they exit.”

So, I hope you enjoyed that and I will be back with my commentaries soon. I think I'm going to redo The Host, since I started beaking it before I really got into the swing of things.

2 comments:

Chaos~Dreaming said...

OMG! Hi. Lol!

I just barely read your comment. thanx, btw. I already started to finish my new one, about the faeries, and for some reason, I wrote the extreme cheesy sex scene...it was very weird, Lol!

I was wondering why you hadn't updated! Exams, huh? They suck.

I get out of school on the 29th. Hi-5! Lol! I'm looking forward to that, too.

Random: You know I heard my "feminist" ENGLISH teacher repeat the "Edward's just protective..." spiel. It was scary.....T.T

She's my favorite teacher, too.

Chaos_Dreaming said...

Hi!! What happened to you?

I'm still waiting for that loaf-sitting story...Lol!

It turned out that I did have to watch my tenses, because the dragon story is totally full of blue marks...Lol!

When are you coming back?