Saturday, September 23, 2006

Ch ch ch changes!

Here are the changes my story has gone through:

The dog has been changed from a Great Pyrenees who's an alien to a poodle named Jimi who is normal.

The guy's name has been changed from Logan to Asher to Holden.

It has changed from a hostile invasion in which the aliens leave for no apparent reason to a hostile invasion of a splinter group of rebel aliens who get destroyed by other aliens.

The cocoons originally arrived in UFOs under the cover of Northern Lights, then they arrived in lightning bolts, but now have just appeared.

The detective's name changed from Trisha to Jade, except now I got rid of her altogether.

There was going to be terraforming, but I thought that would be too much work so I got rid of it.

Aliens were going to be suspected because some skin was found under an old man's fingernails that they killed, but now they find dried blood on his knife.

Holden was going to be a reporter from a rival newspaper, but now he's just a UFO freak.

A scientist who figured out how to open the unopenable cocoons was going to commit suicide at the prospect of an alien invasion, but now he gets killed by an alien who was sent to keep an eye on the cocoons and make sure they hatch.

The aliens were going to have machete arms, then blades on their forearms, and now blades on their elbows.

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